Suggestions for improvement?

[Dave S.]

I had an opportunity to photograph the cockpit and interior of a business jet.  It was in the hangar, so I've blacked out the cockpit windows.  From those who've done this sort of thing before, any suggestions on what/how to improve this shot?  One of the more difficult things that I experienced (well, two actually), was trying to get the camera perfectly aligned (vertically, horizontally and centered).  The second unexpected challenge was just how difficult it was to light it well while avoiding reflections in all of the glass hardware.

As large as corporate jets appear to be, their cockpits aren't all that large - so maneuvering around and trying to light it up was a bit more of a challenge than originally expected.